"You came my darling...buy why now?"

Lover

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Apr 11, 2008
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#1
You came my darling, but why now?
You came my darling, but why now?
Unfaithful, Heartless, why only now that I have aged and have tired legs?
You had the antibody
But you only came once I had died from the poison

You Hard-hearted, Heartless, Stuck up
Why didn't you want it earlier, why now?
Our life doesn't give the chance for your "maybe today or tomorrow!"
I am going to be your guest only tonight! Why tomorrow?

Sweetheart, sweetheart, sweetheart
I have given my youth to your playing hard to get
Now go and play hard to get with the youth, why with me?

Damn these short worthless lives of ours!
Why did I get fooled like a mad lover?
The heavens cry for the gathering of the excited
I am surprised, I am surprised
How come the world doesn't explode from the pain!


Shahryar (the name of the poet), you should not have travelled without you lover
This is the way of the lover; why are your travelling alone without a companion?
Why alone?
 

Lover

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Apr 11, 2008
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#6
oh really??

not so good ey...thanks for letting me know, I was gonna send it to this girl who didn't want it on the first date or something like that (she doesn't speak such good english)...but if it doesn't sound good now, I won't send it to her!

thanks for the feedback...
 

Lover

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Apr 11, 2008
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#9
Can someone translate this better than me please? If not, I can do it too...but some people seem to be experts here :) thanks

آمد آمد
آمد اما در نگاهش
آن نوازش ها نبود
چشم خواب آلوده اش را
مستی رويا نبود
نقش عشق و آرزو از چهر دل شسته بود
عکس شيدايي در آن آيينه سيما نبود
مست و بی پروا نبود

لب همان لب بود اما
بوسه اش گرمی نداشت
دل همان دل بود اما
مست و بی پروا نبود
مست و بی پروا نبود
در دل بيزار خود جز
بيم رسوايي نداشت
گر چه روزی هم نشين جز
گر چه روزی هم نشين جز
با من رسوا نبود
مست و بی پروا نبود
لب همان لب بود اما
بوسه اش گرمی نداشت
دل همان دل بود اما
مست و بی پروا نبود
مست و بی پروا نبود

بر لب لرزان من
فرياد دل خاموش بود
آخر آن تنها اميد جان من
تنها نبود

http://www.yemahal.com/song/17427.htm